Me: heya! -dodges a fireball as it whizzes past me and ignights the head of the camra-man- I am the blood elf but I guess you guys can call me Kara.
Richard: -from off screen- I'm Richard.
Me: -ignoring him- this is where you come and talk to our faverite evil-good-guys in person: i present Cale'Anon Vatay! -a spot light illuminates Cale making a hero pose- Benn'Joon! -a spotlight on Benny as she lounges on the couch- Krunch Bloodrage! -his figure was half in shadow as a spotlight illuminated him- Pella! -she fingered her axe threateningly- and our faverite Richard! -he made some sort of ganster movement as a spotlight rest on him as he relaxed in his seat-
Richard: Yo.
Me: no rules in this chat sept that if you kill or be killed you have to make a creative way to come back to life and you must introduce youself or i will ignore you.

Name: Kara Bloodelf
Age: 307years
Race: 1/2 undead-worlock-thingy 1/2 elf
Pet: Large female tiger
Marks: blue and black curving tattoos down her arms, legs, stomich and back.
Skin: light bronze.
Eyes: ice blue.
Hair: Very long chocolate brown.
Clothes: black loose jeans, black buckle boots, top like Benny's sept blue, black cape and silver shoulder armer.
Powers: like Richards sept that i can die. that is if they hit me.

Richard: lame.
Me: -hits him over the head and foosh his head- anyway have fun and dont piss off the warlock too much.
Richard: -turns to Cale, head still on fire- can we keep her?

This is... Very awkward.

Me: -got Richard in a headlock as he tries to rip my head off- how so?
Cale: Miss Kara... what on earth are you doing?
Pella: i believe ye is attacking the warlock.
Benny: is that wise?
Me: corse not. it is fun though.
Richard: ... -struggles to get free of my grip-

Still awkward

Warlock is a race ? Then so is a bus driver...

I found it highly amusing. Do go on i want to see how this will end.

I find this confusing and it seems displaced. Shouldn't this sort of thing be in fanfics?

She's like a Mary Sue that's escaped a fanfic..









RUN

What the pie?

I don't think you cn consider "Warlock" as a Race...

Yeah, warlock is more of a profession while elf is a race.

^The Idiotic Oracle has won my trust due to that single post.

;D

Me: -thinking as i stuff Richard into a cage- i donno.. i think warlock is a race... because they aint human or elf or anything like that are they? -writes "Property of Kara" on Richard's face with a permernent pen- and as for the "mary sue" comment i am not overly obsesive of the characters i just like being odd. Caramel slice? -holds out some to viewers-
Richard: -to cale- why do i get the feeling that she really doesnt like me?
Benny: i think she does but this is how she shows her affection.
Richard: YAY!

... you need to look up the definition of Mary-Sue..

specifically, you're a Warrior!Sue: The Warrior!Sue is usually loud, obnoxious and (of course) an amazing warrior. She'll usually have some tragic past that led her to become a warrior, and she'll upstage all of the Canonical characters with her mad Sueish powerz.

mixed with a Mage!Sue: Similar to the Warrior!Sue, the Mage!Sue has amazing stregnth in magic, or has a magical power that nobody else has. She'll usually wind up upstaging all of the magical characters of the series.


:|

Me: -pauses in the attempt of getting Krunch into a collar- ...that sounds like the main character of the book i'm writting. -dodges a fireball and it hits my mangager- plus i am in no way stronger in magic then Richard or Benny or stronger then Penna -does a micky-flip off Krunch- i am just a lot faster and daring ^.^ -trows a spoon at Richard and it pirce his skull- and I made this fom up so that everyone can join in with the story. ^.^

ugh.. that.. that's a very, very bad thing, you know.


But then again, the people who tend to like Sues never do recognize how much it sucks. *groan*

"Author surrogacy is a frequently observed phenomenon in hobbyist and amateur writing, so much that fan fiction critics have evolved the term Mary Sue to refer to an idealized author surrogate. The term 'Mary Sue' is thought to evoke the cliché of the adolescent author who uses writing as a vehicle for the indulgence of self-idealization rather than entertaining others."

Just ignore her, dude. A Mary Sue cant be beaten by anyone except a stronger Mary Sue, a Gary Stu, or a really strong troll/flamer to send them running to LiveJournal.


No. Warlock is a class, just like Mage or Healer. Do your research, Ive included a link to the Wikipedia article since I doubt you'll be doing any other than that.

And before you decided to gripe to everyone about learning English in your signature, please check your own spelling or you'll seem like a total hypocrite.

Umm... I don't think this belongs in fanfics... More a silly RP if you ask me... o.o

Also, warlock is a class, not a race.... Richard is an undead warlock, just like pella is a dwarf warrior, or benny is a troll-orc-whatever cleric.



Yes, this does seem sue-ish so far...
Give it a little more time to develop, but uh... It looks very mary sue right now...

Its more of a fanfic I think, an RP would involve other people acting it out but this seems to mostly be her messing around with a character and his personality. A very Sue-ish Fanfic. :/

Kara: ... -goes sit in a corner and mope-
Cale: ...well at least she isnt killing anyone... -looks closely- what is that red stuff she is drawing on the wall with?
Benny: i sugest you dont look behind you.
Cale: -turns around and spots the man eating tiger Kara had set onto the Audience- -slaps a hand over his face-
Richard: -still in his cage- dont you ever get tied of being wrong?

that is the point: my spelling is so bad that if you start to understand it your level of english knowlage had degrated to my level.

I'm not the one who moved it here, but it's not really a fanfic and it's starting to get out of hand and derail, therefore it is being closed.