Here is the sequel to Wrath of the Dark Queen. I hope I do okay with this one.
***
Koltira ran through the burning town, this can't be happening, why were the undead attacking? She carried her little sister to the forest, seeing the sheer wall of soldiers surrounding it, she barreled through the undead and ran as fast as she could. She ran for hours, until she suddenly bumped into an old man with three green stones in his forehead.
"Sorry," She mumbled.
"It is no problem, Elf. I have something for you, though." he replied.
"Hm? What is it?"
He handed her a small pouch. "Trace the runes in the heat of a fire."
"Wha-" she noticed that the man had disappeared.
"Hm. I wonder what this is."
She started to pull the strings open, when she felt a tug at her pale blue dress, "Tira? I hungy."
That was little Kyra asking for something to eat again. She saw an elk and pulled out her bow.
"Just a second, be quiet."
"Kay, kay."
Koltira released an arrow and the wind from it blew Kyra's long elf ears back. It landed solidly in the elk and it fell to the ground. Koltira ran over and pulled the arrow out. She pulled out her knife and started to gut it, just like her mother did. Her mother. She had died in that battle. Her father too. A singl tear rolled down her cheek. She started a fire and roasted the elk meat, and remembered the man's directions, trace the runes in the heat of a fire. She pulled an object out of the bag that was actually a stone with glowing runes on it. She began to trace the runes on the stone in the scorching heat of the flame. After she was done, it started to glow intensly and was soon so hot she dropped it onto the floor. A bright flash blinded her. After it was gone, she saw the shapes of beings form infront of her. They solidified and an elf who seemed to be the leader stepped over to her, "Hello, what is your name? And how far has Des- I mean Fred conquered?"
Koltira was confused with these questions for a moment, then answered "My name is Koltira, this is Kyra. And who is Fred?"
He looked at the female undead, who was watching him sternly, "I'll tell you later, right now we should set up camp."
"You can tell us a little about yourself." The tuaren said kindly.


How was that for the first post?

Pure awesomeness!

Very good intro, interested to see the next post

"First of all, who are you?" Koltira asked.
"I am Cale, this is Krunch, Pella, Benny, Richard, Designia and Sooba."
Designia and Richard had very dissapointed expressions, "You forgot someone, again." Designia told him.
"Who-oh, and this is Felbunny."
"I've come from a village the undead was burning and enslaving. They killed my mother and father. Me and Kyra were the only ones who managed to escape."
"Des-Fred will pay! She has done enough plunder!"
"What plunder has she done?" Koltira asked.
Cale told her the whole story, from when they met Designia as she rose from the ground.
"So," Koltira looked at Designia, "When did Fred take your spot?"
"After I put Cale in that pink dress."
"I wish I could have seen that." An all to familiar voice said from the forest.
"Archmage?" Pella questioned.
"No, his brother actually. He is too busy with that creature of his to pay attention to the tasks at hand. Mother always did like him best, I don't know why. He was very sluggish and useless."
"So, why are you here?"
"To discuss some things....."
***
Brynne's eyes snapped open, that was an odd dream. Probably just from her nervousness of the first day of seventh grade. It was Thursday, so she anxiously went over to the computer to look at the new page for the day. After she was done laughing at Richard, she checked her favorite fanfic and went to see if there was any more. Just as she was about to click on the title, Wrath of the Dark Queen, she heard her mom call for breakfast, "Coming!" She yelled and gobbled up her eggs and bacon. She grabbed her back pack and ran to catch the bus. She went over to her friends and started to tell them about the new page, they didn't have internet so they read it on her's. "It was so funny! He held up Sooba like in the Lion King! I can't wait until monday! and I'm pretty sure Designia Darkblade has put down for story on her fic! Why does school have to innterupt everything? I have Mrs. Baitman this year! I've heard she's such a horrible teacher! She's supposed to make you do a stack of homework three feet high each day! I'll never be able to keep up with Designia's fic! Did you read the latest post? One more until the ending! Then there's a sequel, I'm so happy........." She went on and on with her friends until they reached school.
"See you in second hour, Brynne!" Kiesha called.
"See ya!"
She walked into the musty building and walked into Mrs. Baitman's classroom. She got ready for school.
***
Brynne walked into her room and logged onto WOW. Her eighty needed some new gear, and her guild was whining about having a raid. She set up one for Saturday, and went to go do some dailys.
When she was done, she went to Designia's fic and read the rest. She couldn't wait until Designia got up the sequel. The ending left her ready to pull out the cinder block.
After a few hours of replies and listening to her favorite band at the same time, she was ready to collapse. Brynne fell onto bed and slept with half of her off the bed. After an hour or two, she fell off the bed and woke with a start. "Ouch."
"Ouch, indeed." said a voice.
"Who's there?"
"I am the brother of the archmage and am here to collect you so you can participate in your destiny. Your power is needed."
"Who is the archmage and I'm not going anywhere. I will not survive without LFG."
"I'm sure you'll get your share." The man said with a smirk.
"I think you missed the institute for the insane and half-witted. It's down Loony road."
"I have come for you, Brynne Johnson." he said seriously.
"Okay, you totally just sounded like the reaper."
"You will come with me whether by will or not. Step into this portal and you will be taken to the world of this so-called LFG."
"I get to meet Richard?" Brynne said with wide eyes.
"Yes. And don't worry, I'll see to your parents."
"Who cares about them, they'll live. Just take me to Richard!"
"Follow me."
She did. And, note to self, never follow old guys into portals, seriously, it's not smart.
Brynne emerged in a forest, her eyes focusing on Richard only.
"I can't believe it. You are real! You're Richard! Cheif Warlock of the Brothers of Darkness, Lord of the Thirteen Hells, Master of the Bones, Emperor of the Black, Lord of the Undead, Lord of the Dance, And Mayor of a little village up the coast! I am your biggest fan! You are awesome! Your so awesome there's no word to explain how awesome you are!"
"Little one-" Cale started, and was cut off by Brynne.
"Sock it, Cale."
"I was wondering, will you teach me how to be a warlock? I want to learn how to fwoosh!"
Richard was a little stunned, "Sure, kid. I can't fwoosh my fans."
"Is that Designia!" Brynne's eye's widened. She was in her favorite fanfic!
"Can I fwoosh her, please?" she asked.
"No, she is vital to the plan."
"Fine."
"Brynne, if I could have a word with you-" Cale started agian.
"All the information you need to know is that I know everything about you."
"How?"
"Here. Be careful! Those are my only copies." She said as she handed Cale her copies of Vol. 1 and 2.
"I take them with me everywhere."
Cale and Krunch were examining the first volume.
When they had finished, they saw Brynne fwooshing squirrels at Richard and Designia's sides.
"This is going to be such a happy journey." Cale sighed.


I introduce the next char!
Edit: I just noticed! I spelled my-I mean Brynne's name wrong!
Edit: Fixed it.

The extent of your fangirlism is rather...disturbing.

I totally agree with Devin.

And you are sure about your fanfic sequel? i mean that is weird and also amusing, but at least i vote weird and intersting and weird k i will see how you continue that.

I feel that you have a big plan with your this fanfic so i will relax and wait how that goes on.

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Please don't do that. When you post, wait until it posts your reply and returns you to the topic. If it gives you an error, reload the topic and see if it posted before trying again.

What is wrong with very obsessed fangirls? I thought it would be interesting to try and give Richard a fangirl who was way to obsessed.
I will take this further, after I finishing reading a really good book I found. I can't stop reading!
And, Brynne is not like me except for the fact that I also like Richard. And her name is a little similar to my real name, not my forum name.

"What exactly are we supposed to do, Archmage's Brother?"
"First, you must defeat Gater and take his sword, then use that to open a chamber. You will know what do when you get there. And my name is Roiben!"
"Okay, Archmage's Brother."
"Where is Fred? I would like to help you. Fred is a ruthsome villain!" Brynne asked.
"She is currently marching to Tyne."
"Let's go."
"It is nearly dusk."
"Your point?" She asked Cale. He sighed.
They packed and set off to Tyne.
***
"HOW ARE THEY ALIVE?!!!!" Fred roared.
"I believe they're lives were anchored to a stone." her advisor whispered cautiously, "And we have run out of babies, your majesty."
"Take it to my complaint manager." Fred pointed towards a black skeletal dragon.
"I will tell them your answer." he said while backing away.
***
"We must hurry to make it to Tyne before the army."
"I don't think that will be accomplished." Benny said while pointing at the army that was thundering in the same direction.
"Subtlety is the key." Cale whispered, then slapped his hand to his face as he saw Designia, Richard, and Brynne leaping out with flaming hands.


I'm having a visit with writer's block right now, I will have more up soon.

Now things get very interesting. And I wonder how the group will manage to handle Richard, Designia, Fred AND Richard-fan Brynne

You forgot the Cale-abuse.
There will be plenty of that. My sister is being extra-annoying. Which is very bad for Cale.

The trio of of Richard, Designia and Brynne headed straight to Fred, who was staring at the destruction before her.
Brynne pulled out a dagger no one knew she had, and slashed Fred across the cheek, green blood oozed out of the wound.
"Who dares......" Fred turned and saw Brynne in a fighting pose.
"I do. The world will be so much better with a bumbling idiot such as you. And it is better with a very nice evil warlock, in training." Brynne growled at her, obviously throwing caution to the wind.
"You little brat! I am the only evil one who will stand!" Fred screamed and raised her broadsword.
"I think you got me and yourself mixed up. You're the brat, I'm the evil one."
Fred roared with rage and blinked, only to find the girl right up next to her examining her horse.
"Nice death horse. I wonder what happens when I do this......" She yanked hard on the horses mouth ring and leaped off, flipping through the air before she landed next to Richard. Meanwhile, the horse reared up and Fred flew off, landing in the dirt, "Well, help me!" She yelled at her soldiers who were standing there.
One reached out his hand and started to pull her up. She incinerated him within a fraction of a second,
"Don't touch me!" She flipped back up and took another soldier's horse.
Brynne was suddenly right behind her in a second, fingering her cape, "Nice cape, where did you get it? I always wondered that. Ooooooh! It's the stone you used to make your voice loud! Can I try?"
Brynne pulled the stone out of the Queen's belt and fingered it, "Hello. Testing, one, two, three! Cool, it works!" Her voice echoed through the area, "Luke, I am your father." she said in a deep voice, "I have come to destroy you! And Cale who's hiding in that bush over there! He will show you his power! Which is the power of the bearly mighty chicken!"
"Give me that!" Fred's hand reached for the stone, which was slapped by Brynne," I'm not done!"
Brynne continued, facing Fred "Guess what? I know your real name!"
"How do you......" Fred said a little breathlessly.
"It was sewed into your cloak. The Undead Queen's real name is.........." She mimicked a drumroll.
"Judith!" She said in a solem tone, laughs echoed through the entire army.
"Silence!" Judith yelled, the laughter did not pause.
"Any who is caught laughing will be drawn and quartered by the Drake!" The army was silent at once.
"Sieze them!" she yelled.
"No, wait, don't sieze them, gdo the chicken dance instead!" Brynne said in a perfect mimic of Judith's voice. The soldiers were confused for a moment, then looked at the dragon. All of them burst into dance with no resistence.
"Sing the chicken song too!" Brynne added.
They burst into song.
"NO! STOP! THAT IS THE GIRL TALKING! SIEZE THEM!"Judith yelled, but her voice could not be heard over the din.
Brynne was enjoying this very much, same Richard and Designia, "Now pretend you're a dog!"
Barks echoes through the army.
Judith managed to get the stone away from Brynne,"Hey!"
"I command all of you to stop this immediatly and sieze them!"
The soldiers stopped and charged in three different directions, some towards most of the group, others toward Richard and Designia, and some barreling straight into their Queen in an attempt to attack Brynne, who was somehow confusing each and everyone of them.


Brynne is a bit odd as you have seen.

I'll try and get more as soon as I can.

hey you don`t told us how old Brynne is I wanna know that
Well, the story is still weird with that little "brat" but i can deal with it and i think it is a good story after all.

I wonder if we seen some fights soon or maybe a new enemy or some sort of that.....who knew that? Yeah, Des know that and so please keep thinks go on

I'll try and get another post up tomorrow, and tell you how old Brynne is now. In a short post.
***
A crowd of soldiers surrounded Brynne, but did not come within five feet of her. She rummaged through a bag that nobody had noticed she had. She pulled out an object triumphantly. It was a small radio, complete with speakers and disc player. Most of the soldiers stared at the object. Brynne didn't seem to notice them and set a disc on the slot. She turned it on and turned up the volume as she waited for the song to start. Everything stumbled back as heavy metal music blared from it.
"What kind of magic is this?" The Queen asked.
"It's a called 'Technology' you haven't heard of it."
After three songs, Brynne put it away and pulled out a bottle of perfume. None of them realized that she knew they were here to fight and she was preparing an attack with what she had. She knew from experiance that when perfume was sprayed thickly, it would make them cough for at least ten minutes straight. She put a gas mask she had in her bag on (Don't ask where she got that.) and got ready to shoot the rose scented perfume.
"Prepare, your death is at hand." she said, to make them think it was poison or something.
She sprayed it all around, in eyes and in deep clouds around faces. Soon the area was coughing and gasping for non-scented air. She put it away and laughed.
The Queen managed a few words between the 'magical poison', "You win this battle, but I will be back! RETREAT!" the army was happy to do so.
Brynne started to roll on the ground with laughter when they were gone.
"What is so humorous about defeating an army with that poison?"
"It wasn't poison it was perfume!" Brynne told him.
"What is this deadly 'perfume' "
"It's not deadly, girls spray it on to make them smell nice. I told them that their death was at hand before I sprayed it, and they thought it was!"
"Fascinating. What other things to you have in that bag?"
"I'll tell you after we set up camp."
***
They sat around the warm fire, eating elk that Koltira had dried.
"So, tell me young one, what age are you?" Krunch managed before she pulled the items out of her bag.
"My birthday is in three days. I'll be sixteen then."
"I see." a little surprised that one so young was on this quest with them.
"So, what's in the bag?" Cale asked eagerly.
She pulled out each item in turn, "Flashlight, matches, bug spray, sunscreen, iPod, Little Richard Plushie, fake tattoos, shaving cream for some pranks, dagger, bow and arrows, clothes, iPhone, shampoo and conditioner, water, jerky and dried fruit, tent, sleeping bag, pillow, Cale voodoo doll, needles and cloth, string, rope, pocket knife, an old boot, rain poncho, scissors, twine, books, rags, First Aid kit, and a few toothpicks."
"I was wondering why you had such a big bag."
"Know you know. I'm going to set up the tent for me, Richard, Designia, Sooba and Felbunny. That;s all that will fit. Rest of you stay out here."
Brynne pitched the tent and sectioned it off into two tents, so Richard and Designia would be alone.
"Tell me, why did you have all of this packed before you even knew?"
"I was going camping the next day."
"Ah."
***
Cale woke to flaming hair, as usual, and hurried to put it out. They got ready to set off again, when Brynne stopped suddenly, listening, "Come out, I know you're there."
A elfish looking thing with giant bat's wings, a black devil's tail, and cruel beauty walked out of the shadows, "I knew you would, considering......." She let the word float through the air.
"Who are you! And also, what are you?"
"I am Nincnevin."
"You didn't answer my second question." Cale whined.
"That is only the concern of her." She pointed towards Brynne.


Will write more tomorrow.

Nice long post Des, can't wait till you can post more, I am curious to see how this story will play out. Anyway, you are being drafted Des, to Code Black RP, we need some people to play some female chars since it is going to be a super hero/romance RP, you were one of the best bets to come too since you aren't involved in anything else in here besides your Fanfic. RP's are a lot of fun, plus too, it would make Richard very very happy.

Hm. Well, if it will make Richard happy.....
I will do it for RICHARD!
EDIT: Hasn't that RP already started? I don't know much about Rps but.......

Brynne was about to say something to the creature when a sharp yell interrupted her.
"BOB!" a cry echoed through the forest, "Somebody help my two by four!"
Cale rushed toward the source of the sound. The rest followed and stopped in their tracks when they saw a boy about ten. He had red plate armor with spikes that were on fire, and a plank of wood for a helmet. He was crying over a long piece of wood lying on the floor, "Look! Look! This is causing him so much pain!" the boy held up a sliver that had come from the plank of wood.
Brynne pulled out some glue and stuck the sliver back to the wood, "Who are you?" she asked him when she was done.
"I am KYLE THE AVENGER OF WOOD! This is Bob, my trusted plank of wood. And this is Timmy the avenger of Death" he pointed to his sword.
"Don't worry,Bob, it's going to be okay." Kyle said to the wood.
"You do know that's a piece of wood." Cale pointed out.
"Yes, a highly flammable piece of wood. He says you should be careful with that fire,"
"Yeah, okay."



I was forced to make this char by my friend, Kyle, who has a plank of wood he named Bob. He made me make this char. And chose exactly how he'd be. I was not going to make another char. This one won't last to long.

Lol, isn't that also a character on Ed,Edd,and Eddy?

I didn't make this char, and no, that is Plank. This is Bob.
Though Bob is based off of that, yes. And the guy who made me make this char really does have a plank of wood named Bob. He used Bob to make me make Kyle. Wood hurts when smashed against your head, it really does.

More?
Please?
Thank you most awesome fanfic writer.

This waiting is killing me soon. And nobody want that really happen, or?! okay, bad point. But i get bored and have nothing to read anymore....Designia do something

The group's attention was forced back to the strange creature.
"Why should what you are only concern Brynne?" Cale asked.
"I want to fwoosh Bob." Richard said before Nincnevin could answer.
"No, Richard." Cale said firmly.
"I'm going to fwoosh Bob." Richard ignored Cale and ignited his hands.
"NO! I'll-I'll..Give you something! I have many things....." Kyle yelled.
"Do you have a flaming pony?"
"Yes! His name is Mini the Avenger of Death!"
"I'd rather fwoosh that inanimate plank of wood."
"You never will!"
"I'll settle this." Designia was about to fwoosh the plank of wood before Richard could, when a piece of paper appeared out of thin air, "What's this?"
She read the paper aloud, "It's from the queen, it says: My name has been officaily changed to Siloaria, so no more calling me Fred or Judith! Also, I have decided to make a treaty. If you will stop trying to defeat me, my army will stop trying to hunt you."
"Hm. She's probably lying about the treaty....."
"I think it's better at the moment if we pay attention to Nincnevin right now." Cale said.
"Yes, so....why exactly are you here?"
"I have come to take the child."
"Sorry, I've already being rented at the moment. I'll give you an I.O.U." Brynne said.
"You're coming with me whether you want to or not."
"I might come....depends on what you want me for."
"I have come to take you becuase you are needed for hos-" a beeping started to echo throught the clearing," My shifts over, the night guy can take it from here. In about three days." she disappeared.
"That was....odd." Benny said.
"Yes. I wonder what they want me for that starts with "hos". It must be important."
"Yeah."
A shape materualized in front of them. A too familiar shape.
"You!" Cale yelled at the queen.
"I come in peace. I just want to verify the treaty. I have it written here, I have signed, now all of you need to. Sign." She held out a pen and a piece of parchment.
"Let me read it first." Krunch said as he took it. It said in a simple sentence: The Undead Queen's army and all advisors, subjects and excetera will not touch you anymore as long as you stop trying to hunt the Queen. Krunch was satisfied, "Okay." they all signed. Siloaria tucked the document into her robe.
"See you soon." she said with another one of her smirks.
"That was easy. Let's set up camp."
"Can I follow with you? I have no where to go and Bob is tired." Kyle chimed in.
"Yeah, sure. If I can start the fire with Bob as the kindling." Richard said.
"No! I can find somewhere else...." he started to turn.
"No, you can stay with us. And we won't fwoosh Bob." Cale said while eyeing Designia and Richard.
"Thank you. I will do my best to reward you."
"No reward neccessary, you may stay as long as you want."


there, more. I want some feedback on the treaty before I continue.

Didn't see it coming but, it seems like it can go somewhere.

The group was sleeping (except for Designia and Richard, of course.) when Cale bolted upright suddenly and woke everyone up, "The treaty! Siloaria said that her army and subjects wouldn't hunt us! That doesn't mean her! Or someone she can hire! And now we signed a magical treaty stopping us from hurting her!!"
Brynne was the only one calm, "No you didn't."
"What do you mean?!" Cale asked.
"This is the treaty. That was a fake." Brynne held up a piece of parchment with a smirk, "I never knew I was so good at pocket picking."
"You got the treaty! What exactly does Siloaria have, then?"
"A coupon for McDonalds. Which is made of paper and is useless here. Unless you have a McDonalds."
"I don't think we do. But I wish I could see her face when she reads it over!"
***
The queen's face was bright red, flames were dancing around the room, "They tricked me! Those filthy, sneaky, slimeball thieves tricked me! This time I will get my revenge! And that little human won't be there to stop me! Right, ammbassador?" she glared at a figure in a shadowy corner of the room.
"We are working on it. We should have her the day after tommorow at the latest."
"Good. Now what would work the best on them.........." Siloaria started to ponder on how to destroy them. She had signed the treaty and her half of the deal was complete, the army couldn't harm them and niether could a single undead. She paced her chambers and thought........


There's more. For once I did something that gave them an advantage, and not Siloaria.
Edit: I just started a new fanfic called Overlord. Check that out, I'm not so sure that I did it right.

Another day had passed, and they woke up with another one of the strange creatures with wings and tail leaning against a tree, but this one was male and had horns sprouting from his head also.
"What do you want?" Cale asked sleepily.
"Her." He pointed to Brynne.
"I told the other one, I'm not going with you. I'm staying and you can't take me."
"I can take you. I will, the paycheck says so."
"I have many reasons why I'm not going with you."
"Give me five reasons."
Brynne curled each of her fingers into a fist,"One, two, three, four, and five." She actually looked menacing with her fist a foot away from his face.
"Usually those would be good reasons, but I'm here to collect and I'm getting what I want whether you like it or not."
"Fine with me." Brynne said and punched him in the face. His nose bled. He winded up his arm to hit her in the chest, and was stopped lightening fast by Brynne. Both of them seemed to be of the same race, moving at the same speed as the other and using similar moves. Brynne spin kicked him, and he leaped into the air at the last second. He aimed a punch at her leg, and she grabbed his arm and tossed him to the ground in one, fluid movement. He was back on his feet in an instant, and sent her flying through the air. She collided with a tree, and still managed to dodge his kick. He spin kicked her, and she jumped up in time to land right on top of his leg. Cale blinked, and they were half-way across the clearing when he opened his eyes. Brynne flipped up into the air as the man tried to knock her down. She came back down on his shoulders and pinned him to the ground.
"I yield. And you are certainly a great warrior to beat the best fighter known to us." he said.
"It comes naturally." Brynne said calmly.

Note: I changed Brynne's age. She is now sixteen. It will fit some of my new plans better.
***
"I'm afraid I still have to take you, good fighter or not. So please come quietly or I will call reinforcements who will force you." he said with a smile.
"I'll go with option C, you go back to whatever it is that your race lives, and deal with you race's own problems, and I'll deal with mine."
"Sorry, but that's not an option." He spoke into a small bubble saying "I am sending a call for reinforcements on the capture of the girl."
A large portal appeared as twelve of the creatures emerged swiftly.
Brynne was casually stretched out on the ground, her hands weaved together behind her head.
"Hey. I got two choices for you, you can leave peacefully without harm, or leave peacefully without harm."
"We have come to take you and we will."
*Two Minutes Later*
"We came to take you and we won't." The only remaining reinforcement said shakily.
"I'll let you go, but only because I don't want to beat you, either." the creature stumbled on the pile of rienforcements as he threw them threw the portal and entered himself. He hurried through to tell the Prince of the failure."
***
The Prince paced his room as he awaited the return of the reinforcements. His father came in to tell him the news.
"Roiben, it has been a failure. She knocked them all out and left them seriously injured. Maybe we should act with plan B."
"I assume that would be best, Father. I only wish that we could turn her back a better way."
"It is the one and only."
"Send them out, then. If it will get us back one of our own kind."
"I agree with your decision, They will be leaving shortly.

Brynne stood ready for battle across from Cale.
"I always thought you had at least part of a brain. But dueling me is something the brainless do!"
"Richard dueled you." Cale pointed out.
"What? You didn't ever knock on his head? Hollow. And he lost, too."
"Can we start this already?" Cale asked.
"Hm." Brynne said then spin kicked him, causing him to fall to the ground.
"I suggest you yield." Brynne said to Cale.
Cale answered by leaping to his feet and trying to punch Brynne in the chest. She grabbed his arm and threw him back to the ground. Then she picked him up and threw him across the camp. He crashed into a tree and had just touched the ground when Brynne ran over there so fast she was a blur and kicked him in the chest. She grabbed his arm and tossed him back and forth between a tree and a mud puddle. Finally, she slapped him on the ground and asked smugly, "Yield?"
"I yield." Cale said slowly.
"I told you so." Brynne said.
"Yeah, I know, I know." Cale walked back to Benny and asked her to heal him, she did. And looked at Brynne, "Do you think you could take on Krunch?" she asked.
"Easy." Brynne answered.
Krunch got up and stood to fight.
"Ready?" Brynne asked.
"Oh, yeah."
Three seconds later Krunch was lying on the ground with Brynne standing on top of him, "Yield?" she asked.
"I yield. Benny, could you heal me?" Benny healed him and shifted over to another log when Krunch sat down.
"I'm glad I got those weird creatures out of the way." Brynne said as she lounged on the ground.
"Yeah, they were weird." Designia said.
"Uh-huh."
Another black portal appeared and many more of the creatures came out with a big, empty sack.
"You again. Which one of you wants their butt kicked first?" Brynne asked. They did not respond and just pulled out small vial of swirling blue mist. One of them un-corked the top and let the hazy mist swirl out. It started to head towards Brynne slowly. Brynne easily dodged it by stepping to the side.
"Nice chemistry set, can I beat you up now?"
Once again they didn't reply.
Suddenly the mist darted towards Brynne and created a swirling pod of mist around her. Brynne was about to step through the mist when she suddenly felt a strong surge of sleep hitting her. Her eyelids dropped, but she fought it and took a step out of the mist. It came over her stronger this time, and she was scarcely aware of how her friends seemed to be locked in place. She didn't think twice about it as another wave of sleep washed over her and she fell to the ground. The strange creature slipped her into the sack and went into the portal as they lifted the body-lock spell off of the group.


I will post more when I get a reply. I haven't got one after a bunch of posts!

I will post more after at least one person replies! I haven't got one in a very long time!

Hehe....I haven`t specially answered, so that you write more in your other stories "Overlord" and "Cry of the Icemark". Make me that a bad person ? This story is well, but the others I find just much better. Please don`t be angry, it is only my opinion

I'm not angry, I think the others are better than this one too, and no worries about not writing on the others, because I just got writer's block on this one and will be writing plenty in others to get an idea.