Orome
Jun 24 2009, 10:27 PM
Of the creation of Efiil
At first there was only nothing and The Guardian. He was the one who sang first note, the note which created the dark. After that he imagined more beautiful note, which he sang and created the light. And that was the beginning of creation of the Efiil, that was the first contrast that was sang and that was the way The Guardian had planed the rest to be made, perfectly balanced, both dark and light, evil and good, rich and poor, brave and cowardly. He wanted nothing more, until he got inspiration. That inspiration was the song of center of Efiil called Fewa. He took Fewa and broke apart her mixture and by doing that sang fire, earth, water and air, four elements, that will exist in harmony for eternities, being part of life both dark and light.
Gary_indiana
Jun 25 2009, 06:30 AM
thats very intresying are you going to continue?
Orome
Jun 25 2009, 10:24 PM
Yes. I have all story finished in my mind for very long time but I didn't write it. Here is the next part.
"Then he created four divine instruments of his songs. It was his planing for this instruments to draw the face of the Fewa. He ordered them to play his song and to compose songs. Among them there was two brothers, and two sisters. Each one had their soul mate among the opposite. Brothers were Amest and Per and sisters were Bola and Nesa."
There is much more but I need time reform it in a way that it should be, the way of a song, as you can see.
Gary_indiana
Jun 27 2009, 06:22 AM
Wow thats ok take your time just dont stop this is kool i like it it's one of the only really orignal fanfics on here