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Mr. Wong
Hey, this is where any writers can post some prose/short stories/anything they want. Seeing as how we have (or had) a poet's corner I thought the writers should get their slice of the pie, or cake, whichever you prefer.

Not sure if this is allowed, so if a MOD happens upon this thread just delete it or whatever.

Anyway... I'm not one to post my stuff first so after someone posts I'll go ahead.
Verbose
I'm sure this will be fine. Individual people (my august self included) have had their own one of these so a general one is probably okay.

From what would have been chapter two of my NaNo attempt if I ever wrote it past chapter three ish.

QUOTE
“Are you sure you’re okay to go to school, honey?” Mom asked me as she was locking the door.

I nodded, trying to ignore Nathan staring at my shoulder for some reason I was sure I didn’t want to know. “I feel a lot better than I look.”

“That wouldn’t be hard,” Jennifer murmured. I mouthed Buck Two at her over Mom’s shoulder and she narrowed her eyes. “You better not give me whatever disease you’re crawling with.”

I just flipped her off and climbed into the back seat, leaving the door open long enough for Nathan to scramble into the car. I didn’t need him in a foul mood because I made him walk to my school. It’d be hard enough without him screaming in my ear all day. The car rumbled to life. Nathan had narrowed his eyes and was still staring intently at my left shoulder. When we were two minutes from school, a slow grin spread over his face.

“You’re not wearing a bra, are you?”

I shushed him, which turned into a coughing fit when Mom threw me a curious look in the rear view mirror. Nathan’s grin was getting wider. Before long, it’d probably split his face in half.

“I’m right, aren’t I? That’s why you have so many shirts on, isn’t it?” he crowed. “Oh, this will be delicious.”

Mom pulled up out the front of school. “You just call me or your dad if you need to come home, okay?”

I nodded sullenly, trying to swallow my rage at Nathan’s cackling, and slung my backpack over my shoulder. Jennifer’s friends descended on her the second she stepped out of the car.

“Oh. Em. Gee. Jenny, that is the cutest top ever!” Mary was shrieking.

Jennifer nodded. “I know, right?”

One of the Annas looked at me. “What’s wrong with her?”

“Do you mean besides the haircut?” Jennifer asked cattily. The drones tittered on cue. “I don’t know. She’s got some kind of disease.”

“Is it catching?”

“God, I hope not. I have to live with her and that’s the last thing I need.”

Slowly, their infuriating babble faded as they hurried off to wherever it is their kind hurries off to. It was almost a relief to be left with just Nathan for company. He walked by my side in unusually companionable silence for a bit before he mentioned what was on his mind.

“The things I could do to just two of those girls-”

“Are things I don’t want to hear about,” I declared firmly, suppressing a shudder.

“What don’t you need to hear about, Fletch?” a cheerful voice piped behind me.

I firmly clamped down on the goofy grin that jumped to my face. Nathan noticed it, of course, and started making kissy faces and sounds behind me as I spun to face Noah and his ever-present shadow. As usual, his perfectly proportioned teeth were almost all visible. Chris and I gave each other an acknowledging nod and resumed our usual habit of ignoring each other.

“Doesn’t matter,” I breathed. I’d forgotten again. I’d have to watch that. Luckily, my heart rate was still steady.

“So,” he began, slinging and arm around my shoulders and heading off towards my locker. “How’s my little jasmine flower today?”

I rolled my eyes. “You know she’s not interested in you.”

“Nonsense,” he scoffed. “Who could resist such a perfectly sculpted model of the human form? She’s just playing hard to get.”

I heard a snort from Chris. “She slapped you in the face two days ago.”

“Ah, my dear, simple friend,” Noah began archly. “You don’t yet understand the female mind. What you see as a rebuff was simply her being unable to keep her hands off me. Isn’t that right, Fletch?” he asked me with a wink.

I could see Nathan flapping a hand in front of his face and pretending to be swooning.
The Lone David
I think it's stopping in the middle of a paragraph, but I'm not done yet.

QUOTE
The dust swirled around the tires as the bus slowed to a stop. Twenty-one year old Jonathan Thomas stared out the window as the desolate landscape and the small tumble down shack that served as a bus station. How cliché, he thought, watching a lone tumbleweed bounce across his field of vision.

“Hey, buddy, you need to get off here,” the rough voice of the bus driver sounded over the intercom. Jon turned his attention to the front of the bus, noticing the man’s bushy eyebrows, wrinkled in a menacing glare. “You here me kid? I said you need to get off, your ticket’s no good.”

Jon sighed and rose from the poorly cushioned seat; it seemed everything in this part of the state was shoddily put together. The young man moved to the door where the driver stood, still glaring.

“You got any luggage kid?” He grumbled, moving to the storage space at the bottom of the bus.

Jon had nothing, and he told the man as much, he had left all of his belongings at The Red Cactus, his uncle’s hotel, when he had left three months ago, leaving a distraught Claire behind him. Jon knew it wasn’t his fault though; he wasn’t ready for a relationship like that, not now, maybe not ever. Claire had been a distraction, he knew it and he knew that as long as he was there with her, he would never be able to overcome his parent’s death. He knew that now he could never go back, he could never face Claire or Uncle James again. Not after having left without a word all that time ago, not after having spent three months without contacting them.

Jon stopped, and looked up, sitting before him was the most pathetic dust hole of a town that the man had ever seen. Every building was painted the same shade of brown, the dust and wind lending their color to the paint job. Directly in front of him sat a wooden board that once upon a time held the town’s words of welcome. The wind and sand had worn the letters away, leaving only the blank face that stared back at Jon.

“Boy, come here,” a high-pitched wheeze sounded from a misshapen lump at the foot of the sign. The lump unfolded to reveal an older man, his leathery skin contrasting sharply with his bright white hair. He lifted a small flask to his lips and a line of amber fluid fell from the corner of his mouth. The man coughed and looked up, “damn it boy, I said come here.”

Jon sighed and trudged towards the man, kicking up dust as he walked.

“Boy, tell me, is you a Commonist?” The man’s raspy voice was much like the desert wind rustling through the tumbleweeds.

“What’s a Commonist?” Jon asked, edging slightly away from the crazy person.

“Boy, how do you not know Commonists?” The seniors voice raised in pitch, becoming a shriek as he finished his question. “They done come down here from the Soviet Onion.”

“Oh! You mean am I a Communist?” Jon said. “No, I’m not a communist.”

“Then you’re going to have a hell of a time here.” The man laughed. “I’m Louis, welcome to Templar.”

Jon took the senior’s offered hand and shook it gratefully. Louis brought the man into the town, dodging through back alleys until they came to a worn down apartment building.

“You got any money kid?” Louis asked him as they entered the building.

“No, I used it up just getting here,”

Louis laughed, “You’re crazier than I thought.” He walked to a door marked “Martinez” and pounded on it. “Hey
Kerri, I brought you another one!”

Jon heard a crash come from inside the room followed by a series of curses.
The door flew open and snapped short, caught by the chain. Jon could see a dark brown eye and a lock of black hair in the crack the door revealed. “What the hell Louis?” Kerri yelled. “I don’t want another one of those damn anarchist kids.”

Louis turned to Jon, frowning, “forgot to ask, you ain’t a ‘damn anarchist’ are you?”

Jon laughed, “No, I’m not.”

“See? He says he ain’t an anarchist,” Louis said with a laugh, “Now open the door and talk to your uncle like a good girl.”

The door slammed shut and reopened, Kerri stood in the doorframe. The girl wore a dark green shirt and khaki
pants that were splattered with white paint. Her dark eyes held a light that showed through her angry glare.

Louis licked his thumb and wiped a spot of paint from her cheek. The girl smacked his hand away, “for God’s sake old man, I’m twenty-two, stop treating me like a kid!”

Louis scowled, “I’ll stop treating you like a kid when you stop acting like one.” He shoved Jon forward, “The kid needs a room and a job, why don’t you set him up?”

“Dammit old man,” Kerri yelled, “I can’t be taking in every goddamn stray that walks into Templar!”

Kerri looked at Jon, “So, you got a name kid?”

Jon smiled politely, still not certain he had made the right decision in coming here, “Jonathan Thomas, uhm, nice to
meet you.” He offered his hand, and Kerri promptly spat in it.

“You’re going to get yourself killed if you treat everyone like that Jonathan Thomas.” Kerri reached into one of her pockets, pulling out a paint-splattered key. “Room twenty-four, rent’s a hundred fifty a month, but if you help me paint the rooms it’s free until we’re done.”

Jon took the key and turned away, heading down the stairs until he stood in front of the
Sayuri Kajira
This little ditty is from something recent.

QUOTE
The breeze rushed past the battleground. It was nothing more than the very place where the five corners of the city merged together - a dark heart to a forbidding Master. The moonlight filtered softly through the veil of a passing wisp of cloud. It smelled heavily of moisture and low tide. It was the shaking that ran up and down your arm that signified that it was going to rain. A befitting backdrop to such a violent end. A crackle of lightning pushed its nose in the middle of our stand-off. Eyes narrowed, knuckles popped softly as the cartilage rolled along bone, the shuffle of gravel beneath feet shifted almost inaudibly against the powerful gust of the wind. Like a Gothic canyon, the walls of slate loomed ominously over us, creating an open canopy to the acidic rain threatening from above. Not even the Gods would dissuade us from our intended goal. Our hearts raced in the tube of our chests; parting our lips in mirrored images as he gasped for breath like fish out of water. This was the alpha... the omega... the start of something big and the end of the flimsy old ways. Either we would unite, or we would find this spot to be the graveyard of our most cherished memories. I chuckled modestly at the prospect of allowing such a hack take me down. There was no malice or arrogance in my demeanor. Not anymore. There was no room for egos. There was only room for those who were willing to die for their beliefs. Die for their cause, no matter how the result was achieved. They call us 'terrorists.' They call us 'extremists.' I call us Revolutionists. Our hearts beat to the drums of our forefather's tunes. We will no longer allow the dust of the old world to push us into submission. We never forget, we always remember.

"What say you, Raziel?" I shouted over the clash of thunder rolling overhead. The wind picked up my words and carried them to her ears. At first, she squinted her eyes to discern what my true words were. We had known each other since our schoolyard days; running carefree through the monastery gardens. While 'Raziel' wasn't her true name, she understood its meaning. As soon as my words hit the furthest depth of her soul, she shook her head. A sign I had prayed she would not give me. The whole of her being prayed invariably for peace. All of the years of teaching her that the world was worth giving a second try... and yet she chose to stand idly by and watch her opportunities ti change it slip through her fingers like sugary sand.

"I can't follow you, Kishori." She replied. I let out a ragged breath. The fire that was growing within my belly called out for a cigarette, but my heart was not in the mood to blaze one to life. All of our long years, we had been more than friends. We had once been lovers. I trusted Raziel with my heart, my soul... my life. Now I felt a sense of betrayal to the way things used to be as she threw my offer to the wayside. It didn't take her long to recoil at the thought of causing a revolution. Maybe my methods were rudimentary, but they were the best way I knew how. What point was there in having the ability to create change and yet doing nothing to cause the rift? Raziel let the wind dance in her hair; wildly brushing it about her face like the tentacles of demons.

"Raziel, please come with me. I need you." I said with a softer tone. Once again, she replied with an apologetic shake of her head. If that was how she desired it, that was how it would be. There was no changing the course of our future - and the past was slowly dying in the embers of what we hoped to accomplish. There was no past. None to speak of with relish.

At the sound of the thunder, an instant flash of lightning... our hands poised as we white-knuckled our weapon of choice... Roulette. We would rush each other with the intent of killing the other. Her idea was to prevent the world that would inevitably be and I wished to release her from the grip of complacency that had stolen the fire that was once my fondest soul mate. Each of us passionate about our cause. Each one worthy of being called a warrior. Tears streamed down our faces; uncontrolled, unchecked, unabridged mournful cries of attack. The wails that exuded between us were the most heartbreaking of all. The crowd that had surrounded us drown our yells, but we could each hear the other. The lines of thought between her gasps for air against the wind apologized to me over and over. This was senseless. We both knew it. But it had to happen in order to open the gateway to a new life.

Our bodies touched for a split second. The urge to cling to the other hung heavily in the air that rushed over our sweat-glistening skin. The electricity of our eyes met as I wished only to curl up against her and shake her free of the chains that weighed her down in this world. For someone so young, to see such innocence lost to the demons that lingered in the shadows, it was sickening. I had to focus on what I was meant to do. Another clash of thunder and flash of lightning passed as her double-edged blade met my butterfly knife. We landed in the opposite corner of one another; breathing heavily as we inspected damage. None yet. We both held back for the sake of the other. If we were ever to finish this, we needed to provoke the other into a more passionate response. We were now enemies.

I must forget you... I must forget how I love you.
Grym
QUOTE
They were once friends. They were the best of friends, playing every day with each other. Yet one day, they had a disagreement. A large argument ensued, but when they both walked away, neither felt better, for neither had won. Now they decided to end it. They fight now, they fight as men. Yet they shall fight in silence. As they stand on the hilltop, they bow formally, and it begins to rain a great thunderstorm. Though they have hatred in their eyes. Their swords meet, as the verbal swords of the past. Their duel, their Battle, is long and fierce. Neither will step back, neither taking a blow. Then, One is struck. A great gash opens in his arm. Yet even as the blood flows freely down his arm, he does not stop. For he sees now, that the strike opened a fatal wound in the defense of the other. The other realizes it too late, and a before he knows it, a sword is sliding cleanly through his leg. He staggers, wounded, and falls against a great boulder, yet he still continues to fight. For to stop now is death. The clang of metal on metal echoes around the plains, as the wind rustles the grass, and the hair of the fighters. The first one to become wounded presses his advantage, but this causes him to become overconfident, and opens a hole in his defense. Metal, a blade, slides out of his back. The other attempts to smile, in triumph. Yet he finds that he cannot. All of the emotion that comes is not triumphant, but sorrowful. Sorrow for friendships long past, and good times now gone. The sorrow plays across his face. Leaning upon the hilt of his sword, he staggers off the hill, and across the plain, trying to find a better place. Yet he will never feel joy again, not in the way he used to. For his friend is dead, lying upon the hillside.


Hurredly written in english class, to a song. Can't remember the name.
Taz
An excerpt from the book I am working on.

QUOTE('The fall of Malakai')
Torchlight flickered against the dark stone walls as a cacophony of voices echoed in the auditorium. Nagmus, knowing his intent, joined the other dark robed patrons. He had been following the creature for some time, waiting for the opportune time. He looked about the room, smiling at the skull piles in the corners, the effigies sculpted from humanoid remains, and the long mahogany table adorned with the bones of slain enemies. Five men sat at the table, each dressed in dark robes, though the one in the center was clearly the headmaster. The chaos ensued for what seemed like hours.

Finally the headmaster, clothed in a dark robe with embroidered skulls patrolling his cuffs and hood, stood and pounded a gavel on the table, calling the mass to order. The patrons took their seats and awaited for him to speak. “Brothers and sisters,” Said the man in a deep gravely voice, “he has come. Our master has finally returned to us in his ultimate form. Through his studies, he has unlocked the mysteries of lichdom, and the truth of existence has been shown to him. Hearken unto his words, I give you, Malakai.”

Malakai arose from the end of the table, and pulled back his hood to reveal his face. No hair was to be seen upon his head. He appeared to be gravely ill. His eyes were dark and sunken while his body screamed of malnourishment. So thin was he that you could almost see the entirety of his skull, teeth and all through his skin. There was no color to his face, nor was there a vein to be seen. He walked to the center of the table as the headmaster yielded the floor to him and took a seat. In a firm voice he spoke, “Brothers, through my studies I have discovered many things.

Death is beautiful and everlasting. Many fear it even though they don’t know they wallow in it. Death is necessary and is part of existence. Without death, life cannot exist. On the contrast, death can last eternal without life. Life is the spark of flame that will eventually result in ash. Death only needs that spark once and it is there forever. The ancients wrote that the original elements were life, air, and water. It was air’s foolishness that eventually brought about death. It created dry land by drying the oceans and its lightning storms battered the land, setting fire to the new forms of life, plants. This caused death to enter the universe and it will stay forever.

Life is merely a parasite living off of death. It can be seen everywhere, not only in the flies which lay eggs upon rotted corpses, but also in the forests. Forest Fires though initially devastating fertilize the land in which the forest grows. The plants live off of the decay that is corrupted death. Not only the plants feed off of death. Herbivores kill the plants and digest them, not only taking advantage of the death the plants needed to grow, but also feeding themselves off of the plant’s death. The chains which bind death grow as carnivores enter the scene for they kill and eat the herbivores and other carnivores. It is these chains that bind death into slavery for life. Life is even so bold as to use death to keep populations under control. In order to prolong its own foul existence. Without death, so many of life’s procedures would become moot. The plant’s could not die, the herbivores could not die, and the population would explode. Everything would become overgrown, there would not be enough space for the creatures to inhabit. It is life’s dominance that disgusts us. Life calls it a “balance”, we call it blasphemy. It is time that death reigns!

It is time for life’s only use to become a way create more death. Life’s existence should become fleeting, a mere flash to be smothered by death’s cold embrace. It is time that life feels the chains that death has endured for so long. Those who agree should seek out the path of undeath. Undeath is a paralysis of the decaying processes set fourth by life with which it gains it’s own nourishment. Undeath is an eternal embrace of death, not an avoidance. Those who object should be cut down in order to nourish and strengthen death. Their souls ripped from their bodies which should then be re-animated in servitude under the necromancer’s will. Each living soul is a link in the tangled chain that binds death. Until each chain is removed, death cannot walk freely and reshape this wicked world into the desolate paradise. Life only springing fourth to be cut down in moments in order to feed death. No stench, nor rot, nor parasitic being will be able to mar the beauty that is death.

Brothers, stand with me, and we can make this goal a reality!” The auditorium erupted in applause with patrons dancing, some jumping for joy, and others clamoring to shake Malakai’s hand and ask him where to begin their path of undeath. Nagmus still sat, awaiting the opportune time. Soon the jubilation subsided, the mass was adjourned, and each went their separate ways to study in secret. Malakai didn’t realize he was being followed as he left the auditorium. The hall was dark, dank, and cramped. Finally the time had come, and Nagmus spoke. His tone and his words caused chills to run down Malakai’s undead spine. “That was a wonderful speech you made back there.”

Suddenly, Malakai was blindfolded. Archaic runes were painted on the blindfold. He felt Nagmus’ hand press on the back of his head. It was then he felt something he had never felt before. It was non-existence from his neck down. His body, and all his flesh vaporized in an instant, leaving only his bleached white skull. Nagmus quickly wrapped beads around his skull to imprison Malakai in his own skull. Though Makalai’s mouth did not open, nor did his jaw move, he spoke clearly, “What, what is the meaning of this?”

“I have need of you,” replied Nagmus, “you see, I am also a lich. Though I sought out lichdom for convenience and an eternity to work, though you have given me a wonderful idea. I shall destroy death himself, take his seat, and craft this universe to my liking. If this is not indeed true, I don’t care. I’m now curious as to what will happen when nothing living exists in the universe. Killing had lost its flavor, thank you for rekindling my appetite.”


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The Lone David
Yeah, I know it's long, give me a break.

QUOTE
Red dust swirled around the tires as the bus slowed to a stop. Twenty-one year old Jonathan Thomas stared out the window as the desolate landscape and the small tumble down shack that served as a bus station. How cliché, he thought, watching a lone tumbleweed bounce across his field of vision.

“Hey, buddy, you need to get off here,” the rough voice of the bus driver sounded over the intercom. Jon turned his attention to the front of the bus, noticing the man’s bushy eyebrows, wrinkled in a menacing glare. “You hear me kid? I said you need to get off, your ticket’s no good.”

Jon sighed and rose from the poorly cushioned seat; it seemed everything in this part of the state was shoddily put together. The young man moved to the door where the driver stood, still glaring.

“You got any luggage kid?” He grumbled, moving to the storage space at the bottom of the bus.

Jon had nothing, and he told the man as much, he had left all of his belongings at The Red Cactus, his uncle’s hotel, when he had left three months ago, leaving a distraught Claire behind him. Jon knew it wasn’t his fault though; he wasn’t ready for a relationship like that, not now, maybe not ever. Claire had been a distraction, he knew it and he knew that as long as he was there with her, he would never be able to overcome his parent’s death. He knew that now he could never go back, he could never face Claire or Uncle James again. Not after having left without a word all that time ago, not after having spent three months without contacting them.

Jon stopped, and looked up, sitting before him was the most pathetic dust hole of a town that the man had ever seen. Every building was painted the same shade of brown, the dust and wind lending their color to the paint job. Directly in front of him sat a wooden board that once upon a time held the town’s words of welcome. The wind and sand had worn the letters away, leaving only the blank face that stared back at Jon.

“Boy, come here,” a high-pitched wheeze sounded from a misshapen lump at the foot of the sign. The lump unfolded to reveal an older man, his leathery skin contrasting sharply with his bright white hair. He lifted a small flask to his lips and a line of amber fluid fell from the corner of his mouth. The man coughed and looked up, “damn it boy, I said come here.”

Jon sighed and trudged towards the man, kicking up dust as he walked.

“Boy, tell me, is you a Catolic?” The man’s raspy voice was much like the desert wind rustling through the tumbleweeds.

“What’s a Catolic?” Jon asked, edging slightly away from the crazy person.

“Boy, how do you not know Catolics?” The seniors voice raised in pitch, becoming a shriek as he finished his question. “Them Christine fellows done follow the Pope.”

“Oh! You mean am I a Catholic?” Jon said. “No, I’m not a Catholic.”

“Then you’re going to have a hell of a time here.” The man laughed. “I’m Louis, welcome to Templar.”

Jon took the senior’s offered hand and shook it gratefully. Louis brought the man into the town, dodging through back alleys where dirty children stared back at them, their dark eyes showing the harsh life they were forced to endure, until they came to a worn down apartment building.

“You got any money kid?” Louis asked him as they entered the building.

“No, I used it up just getting here,”

Louis laughed, “You’re crazier than I thought.” He walked to a door marked “Martinez” and pounded on it. “Hey Kerri, I brought you another one!”

Jon heard a crash come from inside the room followed by a series of curses.
The door flew open and snapped short, caught by the chain. Jon could see a dark brown eye and a lock of black hair in the crack the door revealed. “What the hell Louis?” Kerri yelled. “I don’t want another one of those damn anarchist kids.”

Louis turned to Jon, frowning, “forgot to ask, you ain’t a ‘damn anarchist’ are you?”

Jon stared, but finally managed to stammer, “No, I’m not.”

“See? He says he ain’t an anarchist,” Louis said with a laugh, “Now open the door and talk to your uncle like a good girl.”

The door slammed shut and reopened, Kerri stood in the doorframe. The girl wore a dark green shirt and khaki pants
that were splattered with white paint. Her dark eyes held a light that showed through her angry glare. “Well of course he says he ain’t an anarchist, who is gonna say that out loud?”

Louis licked his thumb and wiped a spot of paint from her cheek. The girl smacked his hand away, “for God’s sake old man, I’m twenty-two, stop treating me like a kid!”

Louis scowled, “I’ll stop treating you like a kid when you stop acting like one.” He shoved Jon forward, “The kid needs a room and a job, why don’t you set him up?”

“Dammit old man,” Kerri yelled, “I can’t be taking in every goddamn stray that walks into Templar!”

Kerri looked at Jon, “So, you got a name kid?”

Jon smiled politely, still not certain he had made the right decision in coming here, “Jonathan Thomas, uhm, nice to meet you.” He offered his hand, and Kerri promptly spat in it.

“You’re going to get yourself killed if you treat everyone like that Jonathan Thomas.” Kerri reached into one of her pockets, pulling out a paint-splattered key. “Room twenty-four, rent’s a hundred fifty a month, but if you help me fix up the rooms it’s free until we’re done.”

Jon took the key nervously and nodded. He headed down the stairs until he stood in front of an aging apartment door. The paint had begun to chip away and the brass numbers lay at Jon’s feet. He squeezed his eyes shut as he turned the key and opened the door.

Kerri’s raspy voice sounded from behind him, “I already finished this room, you can open your eyes.”

Jon opened one eye and looked around, the walls had been given a fresh coat of warm yellow paint. The apartment was larger than he had expected. Three adjoining rooms, with its own kitchen lay before him, with a large bed made up in the bedroom.

‘This is excellent, thank you.” Jon said with a smile, but Kerri had already left.
* * * * *
Jon settled in quickly, his work with Kerri went by and he soon found himself in need of employment. He had looked through the paper several times, but was surprised to find that there were no job listings.

“Kid, nobody reads that, of course nobody’s going to advertise in it,” Louis laughed when Jon asked him about it. “Come on, I’ll take you out and find somewhere for you to work.”

The two went off into the dusty streets of Templar, the wind had kicked up the loose red sand and it swirled around them, making the two men cough violently as it went down their throats and sneeze when it went up their noses.

They had just left a restaurant after having received Jon’s third rejection when they noticed a man standing on top of a building, shouting down to the crowds. He held a cross in his hand and waved it at the crowd as if he were banishing some unholy monster. He wore a set of fine robes, as if he were the Pope, and carried himself with an air of superiority.

“You will all burn in the fiery pits of hell!” He cried as people gathered around him, some jeering at him, some of them listening intently to what he was saying. “The time has come to cast off the shackles of the American government, those who would give heathens and criminals the same respect that they give to God’s sons and daughters!”

“You’re full of shit!” came one shout from the crowd.

“Praise Jesus, cast down the heathens!” shouted an elderly woman who smacked the heckler with her handbag.

“Louis,” Jon grabbed the older man’s shoulder to get his attention. “Who is that?”

Louis shook his head, “I don’t know his real name, but he calls himself Pope John Paul III, he done goes around town and gives this same speech every few days.” He shaded his eyes with a hand and looked around, “looks like he’s attracted some attention too.”

A group of men in trench coats and gas masks had crawled onto fire escapes and the roofs of all the surrounding buildings. They tossed ropes down to others who tied various containers to them and sent them back up.

All of this had not gone unnoticed by Pope John Paul and he shouted to the crowd, “even now the heathens move against the servants of God, I will soon be attacked, and I encourage you all to remember this day.” John Paul raised his hands to the sky, “Remember this day and know that when the time comes it is up to you to decide which side you are on. The side of God, or just another of Satan’s minions.”

A small bottle flew up and crashed at John Paul’s feet, a blue flame spreading from the bottle and catching the hem of his robes. He ignored the flames, instead choosing to shout out to the crowd, “You see? They would silence me to preserve their fascist grip on the country’s people!” The people who had gathered were not listening however, they too had come under attack, more bottles, this time with a different chemical that caught on to their clothing, were being flung into the crowd. The people began to scream as they scattered, waving their arms wildly over their heads.

A rancid stench found it’s way into Jon’s nostrils and he bent over and gagged. “What is that?” He shouted to Louis over the screams of the crowd.

“It’s riot paint, the Brigade must have stolen some from the Police,” Louis shouted back. He caught hold of Jon’s wrist, “we have to get out of here, if we stay we’re going to be trampled.”

The two of them ran into a back alleyway, Jon slowed down as a man dressed in black came down a fire escape and looked over at them. A blinding pain exploded in the back of Jon’s head and blackness overtook him.
* * * * *
Hours later Jon awoke, back in his bead in the apartment. Standing he went into the kitchen, and opened the refrigerator. He pulled out a milk carton and began to drink.

“Didn’t your mother ever teach you not to drink from the carton?” came a voice from behind him. Jon spun around to find Kerri sitting on his couch, staring at him. “You okay kid? That’s a nasty lump you have there.”

Jon reached up and felt the back of his head, nearly passing out again because of the pain. There was a massive lump on the back of his head from where he had been hit. “What happened?”

“You tell me, I came downstairs last night and Louis comes in carrying you and smelling like that godawful riot paint,” Kerri replied. “Just what were you two doing yesterday?”

Jon told her the events of the previous day, a dazed expression on his face. He opened the fridge and replaced the milk carton as he talked. When he turned back to the girl she had a wry grin on her face.

“So, they finally went after John Paul did they?” she asked with a laugh. “It’s about time, the asshole’s been clogging up the town for months with that anti-government bullshit.”

“I don’t even know who ‘they’ are,” Jon replied. “You want to tell me what the hell is wrong with this city?”

Kerri sighed an looked at him, “isn’t it obvious? We have a large anti=American population here in Templar, and these guys like John Paul keep popping up to try and incite riots to kill all the non-catholic leaders in the country.” She stood up and walked to the door, “pray they don’t succeed, life under the Catholic Church would be worse than Nazi Germany.”

Jon stood still for a moment considering her words, the church was supposed to follow the word of a kindly god, how could it be worse than the Nazi party? It was then that it struck him, the Crusades, The Spanish Inquisition, both products of this so-called kindly god. The Christian faith professed to be tolerant and peace loving but it had proven time and again that it truly wasn’t. All ideals of tolerance and acceptance flew away the moment the church encountered something that went against their faith.
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“Of course they’re intolerant,” Louis chuckled, “I never done known a religion that wasn’t.” The older man took a drink of coffee and leaned back in his chair. “What you kids don’t seem to realize is that for a religion to work it needs followers. Those followers need to have something to believe in and when you get some other belief that contradicts it then the Church loses followers.”

“And so they silence that belief,” Jon murmured.

“Exactly, that’s why the extremists here want to bring down the American government, as long as we have to Constitution they can’t kill off all these other belief systems.” Jon looked curiously at the older man who, in a moment of passion, seemed to have forgotten his accent.

“So what can we do to stop them?”

Louis leaned forward, a wicked grin on his face, “that my boy, is the real question. What can we do against people willing to die for their cause?” He leaped up, nearly spilling his coffee, “What can we do against the fanatics who are so obsessed with their cause?”

It finally dawned on Jon what the man meant, “you can’t stop him, just like America couldn’t stop the Islamic extremists in the Middle East.” He sighed and his shoulders slumped down, “There is nothing a man protects more than his religion, and there’s no way to stop them.”

Louis looked at him, the crazed smile still plastered on his face. “There is one way to stop them.”

“What’s that?”

“Fear, make them fearful to ever look out again,” Louis pointed out the window violently. “The Brigade has been doing it for years, every religious riot for the past decade has been caused by them.” Louis shook his head, “it’s never reported on, the Church is too wound into the media, into the government, into the world.”

“Then why does all the other stuff get reported on?” Jon questioned, “the molestations, the DUIs, all of that?”

“It’s to make examples of people,” Louis replied. “Have you noticed how the Church always manages to come out of those situations unscathed?”

“How do you know all this?”

Louis looked down at his watch, “I need to go to work, I’ll talk to you later Johnny-boy.”
Jon sighed, frustrated, as he watched Louis rush out the door. He had received that response enough times, from enough people to understand that he was never going to get an answer to his question.
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